This is a record of my learning prior to January 2022.
I really like how you described what you could see, what you could hear and what you could smell. It really helped me to imagine what it was like on your rainbow. Remember to read your story again to make sure that it makes sense.From Miss Scanlan.
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I really like how you described what you could see, what you could hear and what you could smell. It really helped me to imagine what it was like on your rainbow. Remember to read your story again to make sure that it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteFrom Miss Scanlan.